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  1. Jason Sears says:

    Beautiful haiku!!! Love the meaning and presentation!!! Check mine out too!!! Hope all is well in your life!!!

  2. Bonnie says:

    Hey Jason,

    Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I checked out your haiku and blog. Wow! Good work! Keep up the good writing and the pondering of thoughts. You are definitely a poet!


  3. lamar says:

    Bonnie. I love the conciseness and meaning you put in this haiku. Reminded my of HW Longfellow’s lines in “The Day is Done”
    A feeling of sadness and longing,

    That is not akin to pain,

    -And resembles sorrow only

    As the mist resembles the rain.

    (I absolutely love those lines and the imagery.)

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