Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I checked out your haiku and blog. Wow! Good work! Keep up the good writing and the pondering of thoughts. You are definitely a poet!
Bonnie. I love the conciseness and meaning you put in this haiku. Reminded my of HW Longfellow’s lines in “The Day is Done”
A feeling of sadness and longing,
Bonnie Saul Wilks 
Beautiful haiku!!! Love the meaning and presentation!!! Check mine out too!!! Hope all is well in your life!!!
Hey Jason,
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I checked out your haiku and blog. Wow! Good work! Keep up the good writing and the pondering of thoughts. You are definitely a poet!
Bonnie
Bonnie. I love the conciseness and meaning you put in this haiku. Reminded my of HW Longfellow’s lines in “The Day is Done”
A feeling of sadness and longing,
That is not akin to pain,
-And resembles sorrow only
As the mist resembles the rain.
(I absolutely love those lines and the imagery.)